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Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, and Words
(See: Note 2, below.)Months | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 01 | Totals | fn | Indices |
Book reviews | 0 | o | 1 | 3 | 3 | 7 | 14 | ||
Blog posts | 2 | 4 | 8 | 13 | 16 | 1 | 44 | ||
Words | 112 | 142 | 2190 | 1625 | 1329 | 137 | 5593 | ||
TOTAL | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below)1.1. Showcase | Short titles [+ links] | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M | Notes |
Mega- essay 07.10.12 | KUMAMOTO | 07.10.10 | 21 | 1487 | 4 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26 | Favorite Place | 07.10.26 | 5 | 316 | 0 | 0 | 3 | 0 | |
Movie review 07.11.11 | Movie Review-TOY STORY | 07.11.07 | 5 | 319 | 0 | 1 | 0 | 0 | |
Community life 07.11.25 | Community Life | 07.11.14 | 4 | 322 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 0 | |
TV in Japan 07.12.09 | TV Review | 07.12.05 | 5 | 373 | 0 | 3 | 0 | 0 | |
Learning w/ computers 07.12.21 | Learning With Computers | 07.12.24 | 4 | 180 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
Totals | --- | --- | 44 | 2997 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 0 | --- |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length W:number of words C: number of comments
L: number of links P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
- I think Community Life is the best. Because it has some pictures. People who read it can understand easily and it becomes gorgeously. Another reason is this place. I know this place very well so I can write about this place in detail. I think people who read it can understand easily, too.
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | Kenji & pab in Seattle | 07.09.26 | 33 | bad |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | Mega Essay Outline | 07.10.10 | 21 | so-so |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Community Life | 07.12.05 | 34 | good |
2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments* |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Mega Essay | 07.10.10 | 74 | good |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 07.10.12 | --- | --- |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 11 | so-so |
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | Typing Test Ⅴ | 07.11.06 | 70 | good |
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | Nothing | --- | --- |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | Nothing | Nothing |
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not? - Yes, I do. I have it in sideber.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- Your town has many festivals. I don't know these. I would like to go summer festival. I think your essay need one more paragraph, maybe we have to write 5 paragraphs on this essay.
3.0. Typing Speed Trials
Showcase | Numbers of words | Dates (yy.mm.dd) |
3.1. Worst typing speed trial* | 51 | 07.09.26 |
3.2. Best typing speed trial* | 101 | 07.12.05 |
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst) | 50 | --- |
3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials** | 91 | 07.12.05 07.11.14 07.11.07 |
* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.
4.0. Book Reviews
4.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
2-01 | Kim's Choice | 07.10.03 | 21 | 0 |
2-02 | Little Women | 07.11.14 | 82 | 0 |
2-03 | LONDON | 07.11.21 | 53 | 0 |
2-04 | Diana | 07.11.26 | 81 | 0 |
2-05 | TITANIC | 07.12.09 | 34 | 0 |
2-06 | Bad Love | 07.12.24 | 49 | 0 |
2-07 | NEW YORK | 07.12.29 | 45 | 0 |
2-08 | SURVIVE! | 08.01.02 | 23 | 0 |
2-09 | STARMAN | 08.01.03 | 49 | 0 |
2-10 | SALLY'S PHONE | 08.01.08 | 20 | 0 |
2-11 | CALIFORNIA | 08.01.08 | 23 | 0 |
2-12 | U.F.O.s | 08.01.08 | 22 | 0 |
2-13 | ENGLAND | 08.01.29 | 28 | 0 |
2-14 | FOOTBALL | 08.01.29 | 30 | 0 |
2-15 | ||||
2-16 | ||||
2-17 | ||||
2-18 | ||||
--- | --- | TOTALS: | 560 | 0 |
4.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- I think Little Women is the best. Becasue it was the longest sentences and I wrote a lot of words. I can know about Little Women.
5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
Showcase | Yes | No |
5.1. Does your blog have an archive? | ○ | |
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ○ | |
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
| ○ | |
| ○ | |
| ○ | |
| links ○ | media ○ |
| ○ | |
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
5.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? | ○ | |
| ○ | |
| --- | --- |
5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
5.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.- photos
- links
- reviews
6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing
- I think I can have writing skill. For example, I can write a lot of sentences. But I cannot write a lot of posts so I want to write a lot of posts. And I want to study how to write a lot of sentences in English. I like writing.
7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
- I was very hard becauce I had to write a lto of posts. So, I think you will write post every day.
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Notes:
- This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
- The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
- This essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.
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Hi Satominn,
As soon as you get the rest of the content in your final portfolio (due Jan. 21), please ask Mr. Tomei if he can help you tweak the tables and other sections. Reducing font sizes and removing white spaces between sections may make your entire portfolio easier to read.
Cheers.
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